Ohoshisama ni Onegai!
by Fujisaki Mao
Source: Volume 24, 2000
Translated: Dianne Dimabuyo (DiDi)
Chapter 35
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Disclaimer: Ohoshisama ni Onegai! is owned by Fujisaki Mao. This is a fan translation and no
money is made off of this.
Notes: These translations are *loose* translations. I've translated them so they make sense,
not as much as you may understand everything word-for-word. Why? One, it doesn't always
make too much sense. Two, I've been told I can be too strict on it sometimes, and I should
just translate to vernacular. Mind you, I'm still trying to be as accurate as possible. If
you've found a translation that is closer to the dictionary meaning, yet still makes sense,
please don't hesitate to inform me. Thanks.
: text in bubbles
* floating text
> sound
[] translator's additional notes..
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Page 407
Title page text: From the "time" ten years ago, how far have we come.......!?
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Page 408
* (text in the one-liner recap box)
Tenkawa-senpai kisses a Tomo who's holding back tears from worrying about Aki-nii
unnecessarily...!?
[Ten is holding a wide-eyed Tomo's arms while kissing her.]
Tomo: I....
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Page 409
Tomo: Hyaa!!
Ten: (thought) Ihya?
["ihya".... like "iya" meaning "no!"]
[Tomo trips backwards over a chair and crashes on the floor]
* Owowowow
Tomo: -----Ow
Tomo: <sucks in a breath>
<pants>
<Tomo glares at Ten>
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Page 410
Tomo: T.. there are limits to how far you can tease people!
* Weren't you kissing almost seriously?
<bun bun>
Ten: I'm not teasing at all.
<Ten grabs Tomo's hand>
Tomo: Heh?
Tomo: Um... Buchou?
[Note: "buchou" --> club president]
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Page 411
<beat>
<beat>
Tomo: A........
memory: Yuuji
<beat>
memory: about you----------...
Tomo: .........
* kyu---
* NO!
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Page 412
<beat>
Tomo: ......
<beat>
<beat>
<beat>
Tomo: ?
<wind flapping the curtains>
<door shuts>
* Hoe?
<crowd of people talking>
Guy: *Ah---* It's Tomo-chan--
Tomo: Yeah, yeah. Isn't the yukata nice?
["yukata" --> it's like a Japanese bathrobe... also refers to the informal summer kimono]
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Page 413
Tomo: Um... Sensei... Where's my adviser?
Guy: If you mean Shima-chan, he took Mayumi-chan back to the room. They might not even come
back~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *dehehehe----*
Guy: Anyway, why don't you come in to the furo with u---
[But she's gone already]
* Ara?
* What should I do?
* What should I do?
* It was a joke, right? He was just teasing, right?
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Page 414
Tomo: (thought) That's right!
* He knows I like sensei.
* He's just having fun worrying me...
memory: (Ten) It does have something to do with me--------
memory: (Ten) I've decided to do it by myself. Don't you worry about it.
memory: (Ten) ...Don't get your nose all runny
memory: (Ten) I----diot.
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Page 415
memory: (Tomo) Sensei, you quit smoking?
* So, who was smoking by meat that time.....?
* The one who was by me that time was-------
* But
* doesn't he always treat me like a kid?
<beat>
<beat>
* Doesn't he make fun of me, calling me small all the time? [chibichibi]
* Why does he say that all of a sudden!?
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Page 416
Akira: ...........
Tomo: Sen...
Akira: ...... ........................
Kuze: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Note: Yeah, that was pretty useless.. ^^; Basically, they're far away enough that she
can't hear them, since they're talking pretty low... and it seems like Kuze-sensei is
drunk.]
[Akira supports Kuze as they walk down the hall away from a staring Tomo]
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Page 417
[Tomo runs out of the house and takes a walk in the dark.]
<kako....>
Tomo: (thought) *ha------------* ...What am I doing....
<beat>
Tomo: ......
* Why
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Page 418
* Why wasn't I shaken right away?
* I------..
Ten: ........
[Ten's sitting in the furo, and remembers her reaction when he kissed her hand.]
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Page 419
* I really messed up------------
Off-shot: *gyahaha* HYAHHO------! [Yahoo!]
<water splashes>
Ten: bu
Guys: Synchronized swimming
<splash splash>
* gyahaha
Ten: A...
Ten: ARE YOU GUYS KIDS OR SOMETHING!?
Guys: *kya-------* Tenkawa-kun's come to play-----
Guys: When you start to get wrinkles on your forehead, aren't the effects of the onsen
scattering away?
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Page 420
Guy: *U---fu---fu---* Something's wrong with Tomo-chan~~~~~~~~~
Ten: Wha....
Guy: *kekeke* That's too bad, isn't it--- That Tomo-chan likes Shimacchi, right?
*I've seen. I know.*
Guy: That's a formidable rival-------------*note*
Ten: Uh....
Guy: *But still* But to tell you, I think you shouldn't start something until you've left
the club---?
Ten: ...What are you talking about?
Guy: *Eh-----well* Isn't that something that usually breaks friendships?
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Page 421
* (point to Ten) thinking more
<bubbles>
Guy: Well, even if you don't hurry, your friend's a teacher, right? You admire people older
than you? And Shimacchi's a friend?
Ten: ......
[Ten remembers what Akira said after he almost hit those kids after Tomo was put in a
dangerous position... Chapter 30, I believe.]
memory: (Ten) Wasn't that a lot of force striking at full speed?
memory: (Akira) I would have done it.
memory: (Akira) If they had put even one bruise on her, I would have.
* That time
* Those weren't just a teacher's words, were they?
* That was only a guy's anger..
[as in, he wasn't mad as a teacher... he was mad as a guy.. i hope you understood that..
^^; ]
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Page 422
Akira: Geez... You're just making merry, huh!
Kuze: *nyoa~~~~~~~* Sorry-----
Akira: So? Where is it? The medicine for your stomach?
Kuze: *You're so mea---------n* Inside that bag over there~~~~~~~~
Kuze: Ne---- ne----
Akira: Hai?
* Why are teachers using medicine for the students?
Kuze: Why don't you do it with Chima-chan?
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Page 423
[He tosses a box at her head.]
Akira: *Why?* You shouldn't be asking people about those situations.
<box hits her on the head>
Kuze: Ow.
Kuze: Because
Hey, because
it's other people's problem?
Akira: YES? *You want to try say it louder?*
Kuze: Couldn't be? You haven't noticed?
<goron>
Kuze: Chima-chan's been looking at me hotly.
[as in, glaring]
Akira: .....
Kuze: I feel like I'm not together at all-- so--pi--ti--fu---l
Kuze: So would you not look after me?
Akira: Fine. *No prestige in it*
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Page 424
Akira: But there's a lot I want to do.
Akira: I wonder if I can withstand her.
[as in, not give in to what he *does* want to do.. ^^; ]
Kuze: *Ah-----* As much as possible. It's alright, It's alright.
()
Akira: ....No, it's not. It's a problem of feelings.
* (Kuze) Kidding. I'm sorry. Take it off~~~~~
[Akira had put a glass of cold water on her forehead]
Kuze: A---ny----way---- isn't it painful to have to lie to your friendship with Ten?
Akira: That kid really does hate lies, ne.
Kuze: You're doing your best right now but even that has limits.
Kuze: It's trouble, ne. A triangle with students.
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Page 425
Kuze: But about lying
Akira: Yeah?
Kuze: The truth is you're hurting, aren't you?
Kuze: You like Ten, right? But you can't give up Chima-chan.
Kuze: Isn't that pretty silly. *heart*
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Page 426
Kuze: It's more unbearable for a woman to be made to stake on her honor.
Kuze: For the sake of the man they love, women will lie. They remain unperturbed with a
a little grief.
[women will lie even if they don't want to... and they can't stand the grief of doing so
because they're doing it for the man they love... so kuze says.]
Kuze: I thought you're a guy who would understand that, Akira-kun?
Kuze: Why don't you confess! The truth is you're scared of some other bomb, right?
If you tell her honestly, DOH.....
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Page 427
Akira: That's what you get for chattering about agitatedly...
* U---wa----- That's what they mean by stomach medicine~~~~~~~~~
Kuze: *Shut up* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
* I see...
* Including everything and taking responsibility. Being prepared.
Akira: (thought) Even I'm getting nerves at this time of the night.
* Sooner or later, the wave will come.
* And then----
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Page 428
<GA GA GA>
Tomo: IT'S MOR-NING!
Tomo: GOOD MORNING--------! BREAKFA-------ST!
Tomo: Wake up, wake up-------
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Page 429
Tomo: This morning we've got mushroom soup and iwana broiled fish. We have tofu-tomato-and-
eggplant salad, too! *Wake those stomachs up!*
()
Tomo: We have seconds, too!
Tomo: The industrial arts club has camp 'til tomorrow, right? I made you a lot of curry.
Later, I'll make you monk salad. ()
Tomo: Let's have a meal together. Let's eat!
IA Club members: Tomo-chan, please join our club----------
* We love Tomo-chan. *heart*
Tomo: *gyahhahha* No way-------- I'm the golden egg that's the remaining future of the
Gardening Club!
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Page 430
Ten: Ha-----------h *keh*
Akira: ..............
Akira: ?
Tomo: Ne---- Sensei, a river! A river!
Akira: You want to try to get off by the riverside?
Tomo: Yeah
Tomo: Sensei, can I play in the river?
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Page 431
Akira: Don't go to the places with swift current!
Tomo: Haai-
Kuze: *ho----* She's really in high spirits, ne----
Ten: ......
* (Tomo) Hya---- It's cold-----
Tomo: Ah, a fish!
* (Tomo) So small------ It's cute-----
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Page 432
Tomo: Sensei------ The fish...
<splash>
<soaked>
Tomo: .....
Tomo: Ch.
Tomo: HOLD IT, YOU! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?
Ten: Don't act like you're in high spirits on purpose.
["Don't fake being so hyper."]
Tomo: ...........
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Page 433
<splash>
Ten: URYA!!
Ten: <bu>
Tomo: *hyahaha* Wah hah hah. I got you back!
Ten: ~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ten: .......you
[He calls out to her back.]
Ten: Let's do what happened yesterday.
Ten: That was good.
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Page 434
[Tomo turns around to glare at him]
<beat>
Tomo: But I don't like it.
Tomo: Since it's gonna be weird in the Gardening Club from now on, I don't like it.
* Because I
Tomo: I like you, buchou, but
Tomo: that's only as friends.
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Page 435
<grips her hands tightly>
Tomo: It's not that bad. It's just that...
Let's be as we always were.
[The water rushes around her feet]
<ZAAA>
[Akira turns around and looks at her, alertedly.]
* I'm deceiving him.
Tomo: Ne?
<GOOOOOOOOOOOO>
[The current is picking up about her feet]
Tomo: Let's do tha....
<KAMA>
[Tomo gets caught in the current]
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Page 436
[She falls back into the current as Ten reaches out to her, calling her name]
<splash>
Ten: SA.....
Akira: CHIMA!
* Eh!?
* (text in one-liner preview box)
Aki-nii unintentionally [or spontaneously] calls Tomo, whose foot had slipped, "Chima"...!
Tenkawa is!?
END CHAPTER 35
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Date: December 23, 2000