Ohoshisama ni Onegai! by Fujisaki Mao Source: Volume 1 Translated: Dianne (DiDi) Chapter 2 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Disclaimer: Ohoshisama ni Onega! is owned by Fujisaki Mao. This is a fan translation and no money is made off of this. Notes: These translations are *loose* translations. I've translated them so they make sense, not as much as you may understand everything word-for-word. Why? One, it doesn't always make too much sense. Two, I've been told I can be too strict on it sometimes, and I should just translate to vernacular. Mind you, I'm still trying to be as accurate as possible. If you've found a translation that is closer to the dictionary meaning, yet still makes sense, please don't hesitate to inform me. Thanks. : text in bubbles * floating text > sound [] translator's additional notes.. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 48 Akira: Ok, next problem---- > ton ton (tossing die) > GUKUN > KORO KORORON (die roll) panda buzzer: It really is co-ed.. Akira: Number 32. Number 32, Sasahara! > BI Akira: Sasahara Tomo! --- Page 49 Tomo: Ha.. hai She gets up suddenly from the chair. > GATAN Akira: Hou! While I'm teaching, drawing away from your problems is good conduct. Answer Page 15, number 2 up in front! * (Tomo) Sh... * (Tomo) Shit! And who's fault is it... You have a habit of changing all of a sudden---- * (Tomo) That day. (Tomo) I kicked off my first love that night.. Tomo: .................. A... Aki.... ni...? * heeee---- --- Page 50 > kusha Akira: ...I'm sorry. * (Tomo) That's all he said and then there was silence the whole way, seeing me home... Since that day, I haven't been able to sleep------- * (Tomo) How'd I get into this? * (Akira) Why is 7x8 59? > KA KA (writing on board) Akira: It's too bad you missed the calculation.. The equation is fine. Akira: If you weren't half-asleep, you wouldn't make such a trivial mistake. * (Tomo) ... * (Tomo) I CAAAAAAAAAAN'T Tomo: (thought) I can't look directly at Aki-nii's face! * (Tomo) If I look, I'm gonna look stupid, looking at his lips! [That's a lot of looking.. ^^; ] --- Page 51 * (Tomo) But I absolutely have to ask him today! > KINOKON KANKON (school bell) * (Tomo) I'm gonna die from lack of sleep. Akira: Do Page 16, problems 3-6 for homework. Don't forget! Tomo: Aki... Shimazaki-sensei.. > BATA BATA BATA ban The girls who are trying to recruit her to their respective clubs have arrived at a mad dash.. TrackGirl: Is Sasahara-san here? Tomo: !!! --- Page 52 KendoGirl: Have you thought about it!? You've chosen to join the kendou club!! TrackGirl: No, no.. It absolutely has to be track and field club.. GymGirl: No--- Rhythmic sports gymnastics. * (Tomo) Now isn't the right time! Mo----- Tomo: (thought) Why is everyone jumping to conclusions? Tomo: Anou.. I quit kendou.. Besides, joining cultural clubs... panda buzzer: They don't seem to get it.. KendoGirl: But it's such a waste! You've had experience winning the district tournament! [ken=prefecture taikai=tournament yuushou=victory keikensha=experienced person] TrackGirl: We'll accomodate you as soon as possible at practice hours!? * (Tomo) A---- Discipline---- Tomo: I really don't feel like joining an athletic club! > MU --- Page 53 All3: Hold on! You're really passing all of these up!? Think about it some more! Akira: Hey, now.. So are you threatening her with your scary faces? TrackGirl: (gyaaaa) Shimazaki-sensei KendouGirl: How can you say that right to girls' faces? Akira: Sasahara. Hurry on to PE next. Tomo: Ha.. hai * (Tomo) ....Somehow Aki-nii... Tomo: (thought) At times like these, he's thoroughly just "sensei". * (Tomo) I still haven't taken the opportunity to talk to Aki-nii. * (Tomo) Shit. * The truth is she's been avoiding him like there was a pole between them for 3 days.. [That, being, obviously, a very loose translation, feel free to render your interpretation] Tomo: (thought) My body's getting weak, my eyes are blurry, and I'm dizzy. Koba: Besides, they're getting more violent day by day, trying to get Tomo to join club activities. --- Page 54 Koba: In the beginning, it was just the kendou club. But Tomo ran from place to place with so much energy that the track and field club started focusing on her. Koba: Then while trying to get away from the track and field club, she jumped off the second floor ballroom, staying clear of the rhythmic sports gymnastics club. Tomo: Gyahaha.. No way! I'm not going to make it worse! Tomo: (thought) But I haven't taken time to talk to Aki-nii.. Koba: A. It's Shima-chan. Tomo hides behind a tree. Koba: What are you doing? Tomo: Uh, nothing.. Girl: Ne, ne. Who's that woman? That one in the white coat. Koba: She's our school physician. Girl: What what!? That woman's really close to Shima-chan-- --- Page 55 Koba: I think they've known each other since they were student days. Rumor has it that even though Shima-chan was the Kouhai, they were seeing each other. * (Tomo) E!? Girl: No way-----! What a shock----! * (Tomo) Lover!? Aki-nii's lover!? Girl: But don't they make a cute couple! * (Tomo) But I'm in the way! Tomo: (thought) No.. It's not like that. * (Tomo) Why'd you kiss me if you already had a lover!? * (PE teacher) Today, we're going to time the 50-meter run. Tomo: (thought) Is Aki-nii that fickle? --- Page 56 * (Tomo) Has that much changed in the 5 years we haven't seen each other? Tomo: (thought) What a shock. Koba: Tomo? You're next. * (Tomo) Aki-nii is.. Koba: Race yah to the end-- Girl: She's good---- * (Tomo) What were his intentions? * (Tomo) Was he just teasing me? * (Tomo) Why? Koba: Tomo!? * (Tomo) Why isn't he saying something? --- Page 57 * (Tomo) Why can't I get myself to ask him? Tomo: ........ Kuze: Ara. You're finally awake. * (Tomo) It's that woman...! Kuze: You still finished fourth. You were sleeping well. Tomo: A... --- Page 58 Kuze: What time did you sleep last night? What about lunch? Tomo: No, umm... Today is... > kyururu... Kuze: You shouldn't do that. You have to eat. Take this for the time being. Tomo: .... Thank you. * (Tomo) I.. I wonder if this person is Aki-nii's lover... Kuze: Sasahara Tomo-chan from 1-4, right. Kuze: It's simply anemia from lack of sleep. Kuze: Is there something keeping you awake? > DOKIN > bunyuru Tomo: E!? --- Page 59 Kuze: Nma-- What a stupidly honest kid--- Tomo: (thought) S.. stupid? Kuze: I'm Kuze Mayumi. Nice to meet you. Kuze: Yaa-- Mo-- You're a really thoughtful kid, ne-- Tomo: Huh? Kuze: Nothing. By the way, you should take off your bra so you can sleep better. Tomo: A. Hai. Kuze: You're not gonna reach that size. Kuze: Don't get those ONE CUPs anymore. They're bad for your breasts. It's ok since it's so hot today, ne-- It's gonna be 30 degrees. Tomo: (thought) B.. breasts? Tomo: (thought) She's a great physician. > KON KON Kuze: Haai, come in. --- Page 60 Kuze: She woke up just now, Shimazaki-sensei. > GIKU KA KA KA * (Tomo) Aki-nii!? Akira: Sasahara, how are... Akira: ....you... don't have a bra size. [I think he's calling her flat... either that, or he's saying her bra's kinda small.. Kuze was talking about those ONE CUPs.. one-size bras.. ^^; ] * (Kuze) Huh... That's too bad, huh... Tomo: B... Tomo: BAKAYARO!! --- Page 61 Akira: Excuse me for trying to help! > BAN > GYA HA HA HA * (Kuze) So stupid-- * (Akira) Hei hei. I'm sorry for [what I did] just now. [That first part is like "Hai, hai" "Yeah, yeah"] Akira: So? What's wrong with her after all, Mayumi-san? Kuze: Hm? It's just lack of sleep. Kuze: Could it be because of you, Akira-san? (snicker) Kuze: So is that her? Your cute cute "Chima-chan". Akira: ...... * (Akira) ...Why? He thinks back on the kiss... * (Akira) Why'd I do something like that? --- Page 62 * (Akira) What did I do... She looks at him for a moment, then bursts in to tears.. > PUPI--------- ..but she hangs onto him, looking to be comforted.. > zuruzuru Tomo: Hue? Akira: (thought) acha Tmo: A... Tomo: Aki...? --- Page 63 ...but he releases her. Akira: ------------... I'm sorry... Akira: (thought) What did I do to my little friend? Kuze nudges him, bringing him back to the present. Kuze: Such a serious expression. You did something naughty, huh? * (Kuze) Why don't you tell oneesan about it... * (cell phone) PiPiPi PiPiPi Kuze: An > PI Akira: Yes? Akira: ....Yes ....... Yeah, it's alright. I'm at work right now. --- Page 64 Akira: Huh.. * (Akira) Why? Why? * (Akira) Stop it already, there's nothing you can do. * (Tomo) He was only teasing me.. * (Tomo) I don't know anymore!! Friends: Hey.. Calm down on your eating!! > GU GA GA GA Koba: Tomo!? * (Tomo) I'm cutting him off as a friend. Akira: Number 32, Sasahara... Tomo: I don't know. * (Tomo) Hmph. Akira: .... --- Page 65 Dad: Well, Tomo, what do you want to eat? What should we do for your school entrance celebration? Dad: It's been so busy, we haven't been able to celebrate. Isn't it all so great? My princess.. Tomo: (thought) No, it's not. Tomo: A Tomo: (thought) That's just like Aki-nii's car. It *is* his car... ^^; * (Tomo) E!? * (Tomo) Akinii and.... Kuze-sensei!? Mom: Tomo, what's wrong? * (Tomo) Where are... --- Page 66 Tomo: GE!! She's looking at a building called "Hotel Lavender" which must be where Akira and Kuze went.. Tomo: Huh... Those two really are.. Tomo: Why--- I guess he really was just teasing me. Mom: Tomo? What did you decide on? Chinese? * (Tomo) I see... It's been like this the whole time. * (Tomo) All this time, I was Aki-nii's toy. * (Tomo) It's ok.. It's nothing.. --- Page 67 Mom: Tomo!? What's wrong? * (Tomo) So.. * (Tomo) why am I crying? * (Tomo) Why does my chest hurt? * (Tomo) I didn't know it would hurt this much when my heart breaks. A considerable amount of time later.. * (Tomo) Why can't I sleep? --- Page 68 Tomo: (thought) Ugh.. I still can't sleep.. I don't feel so good.. Kuze: Shimazaki-sensei! GymGirl: Ohayou, Sasahara-san! What a coincidence meeting you here! TrackGirl: Come look in our morning practice! KendoGirl: And observe our early morning training! --- Page 69 GymGirl: Sasahara-san's tired of looking at the Kendo Club, ne? > DON KendoGirl: What did you say--- Her foot slips on the edge of the stairs... > gakun and she comes flying down.. Tomo: KYAAA to be caught by Aki-nii who was nearby.. > DO * (Tomo) ukyu~ --- Page 70 Akira: What are you [girls] doing! * (Tomo) What...? Akira: You should know the difference between what's right and what's wrong! Get back to your classrooms! Think about what you've done! * (Tomo) Is Aki-nii... shouting...? * (Tomo) Wow-- That's the first time I've heard Aki-nii yell like that... She completely passes out. * (Tomo) I guess even Aki-nii has things he gets mad about. A while later, her eyes open.. and her hand is hanging on to somebody's finger.. > paka --- Page 71 which just happens to be Akira's.. Akira: yo Tomo: ... Tomo: ~~~~ Akira: Are you hurt? Akira: Hmm... You seem ok, but your head's kinda burning. Akira: You still can't sleep well? Tomo: ...Isn't that your fault... --- Page 72 Tomo: You kissed me all of a sudden! Tomo: You already have a lover! Akira: Ha? Akira: Who's got a lover? Tomo: I SAW YOU! Tomo: I SAW YOU WITH KUZE-SENSEI YESTERDAY! Tomo: I... I saw you go into a love hotel!! Akira: ...... * (Akira) A? > pomu Akira: Here. Tomo: !? What's this... --- Page 73 Akira: Wed...ding..souvenirs...? Akira: Kuze-sensei and I are constant companions. She lives in the mansion next to the love hotel in Chinami. * (Akira) She was drunk and she had my share of the souvenirs. I waited for her and took her home.. That's these. [ i had to guess at that.. basically she was drunk, he took her home, she had his share of the souvenirs, which she gave him earlier that day... anyone got a better translation? ^^; ] Tomo: No way.. Akira: Why? Akira: You jealous? Tomo: I'm no.. Tomo: I'M NOT!! Tomo(?): What I want to say is, was it a moral kiss? [Is she questioning the kiss he gave her... as a kiss between friends? or between lovers?] Akira: Was my kiss that unpleasant? --- Page 74 Tomo: ...huh? * (Tomo) A.. Tomo: ..... * (Tomo) are? Tomo: I don't.. really know. You took me by surprise. * (Tomo) It.. It didn't feel unpleasant.. Tomo: But that's not the problem!! Tomo: The point is that being one-sided isn't good, Aki-nii! Akira: Even though I'm a teacher... Tomo: You did it agaaaaaaiiiiin. Akira: (thought) A.. This is fun. Akira: If you don't like it, you can escape. --- Page 75 Tomo: Why'd you do that? Akira: I'm not sorry. Tomo: Hue? Akira: I'm not sorry that another guy didn't get to do that to you. [Give her her first kiss, I think. ^^ ] Tomo: What's that... Akira: If you're going to be a good woman, do it for me. Tomo: ...about? A compromise? --- Page 76 Tomo: ~~~~ Do teachers do things like that? Akira: A-- Yeah, that's terrible... Akira: so we'll be secret lovers... Akira: won't we? --- Page 77 * (Tomo) I don't remember the day I first met Aki-nii. * (Tomo) When I followed his advice, I wanted to be with him more. * (Tomo) That's why he exists, to be my older brother and my childhood friend. * (Tomo) Aki-nii moved away and when we meet again five years later.. * (Tomo) This time he's become "sensei". Transmitter: Should we question people if they come wearing a gymnastics outfit? [I think the teachers are using radio transmitters.. they're organizing student activities] --- Page 78 Tomo: Sensei, can we go karaoke? Transmitter: A-- Hai, hai. But get to them quickly. * (Akira) You guys like it, ne-- Akira: If you don't save your strength and provisions, you won't keep up. [I think he's talking back on the transmitter] * (Tomo) But Aki-nii... Shimazaki-sensei... * (Tomo) I don't even think of him as my lover. END CHAPTER 2 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Homepage: http://ohoshisama.cjb.net/ Email at: lilasia@hey.to Date: August 24, 2000