Kareshi Kanojo no Jijou by Tsuda Masami Source: Tankubon 8 Translation: Dianne Dimabuyo (DiDi) Description/Formatting: melz Act 35 Act 35 14 DAYS 14 DAYS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Disclaimer: Kareshi Kanojo no Jijou is owned by Tsuda Masami and Hakusensha. This is a fan translation and no money is being made off of this. Notes: These translations are *loose* translations. I've translated them so they make sense, not as much as you may understand everything word-for-word. Why? One, it doesn't always make too much sense. Two, I've been told I can be too strict on it sometimes, and I should just translate to vernacular. Mind you, I'm still trying to be as accurate as possible. If you've found a translation that is closer to the dictionary meaning, yet still makes sense, please don't hesitate to inform me. Thanks. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 72 1 [View of clouds in the bright sky.] ?: [off] So ho-----t 2 [View shifts. Two students walking along the corridor.] Guy 1: The heat returned so quickly. Guy 2: And it just rained yesterday. 3 [View of a can of Pokari Sweat, being dispensed from a vending machine.] machine FX: can FX: --- Page 73 1 [Tonami, standing beside the vending machine, drinking from his can.] Tsubaki: [off] Tonami! 2 [Closeup of Tsubaki, slightly sweating. View pulls back to show her leaning out a window on the second floor, throwing down some coins to Tonami.] Tsubaki: Oolong! Tsubaki FX: 3 [Tonami, catches the coins with one hand, while holding his can drink on the other hand.] Tonami FX: 4 [Tsubaki catches the can drink which Tonami tosses to her.] Tsubaki: Thank you. 5 [Tsubaki and Tonami both leans side-by-side on a wall. Tonami is drinking from his can, while Tsubaki opens hers.] can FX: Tsubaki: Hm--- It's so hot already. 6 [Closeup of Tonami drinking from his can.] --- Page 74 1 [Side view of school building.] 2 [View of a shady area.] 3 [Background view of clouds in the sky.] 4 [Closeup of Tonami. He's sweating and looking afar.] 5 [Closeup of Tsubaki. She's sweating and looking afar as well.] 6 [A white panel.] narration: How long can I keep this up? I seem to be stretched to a desolate determination. --- Page 75 1 [A white panel.] narration: I want to be freed. I want to be noticed. I want to catch the special freedom that is Sakura's heart. 2 [View of drains. The sky is reflected on the water streaming out from it.] --- Page 76 1 [Tsubaki's profile, her eyes closed.] 2 [Tonami's profile, lost in thoughts.] 3 [Tight corner shot of the school roof.] students FX: kyahahahaha 4 [View of trees swaying, as the wind blows.] trees FX: 5 [Leaves being blown in the sky.] leaves FX: 6 [Background view of leaves being blown through the corridor.] 7 [Tonami and Tsubaki watches the flying leaves.] --- Page 77 1 [Tsubaki closes her eyes as the strong wind blows at her.] 2 [Tonami staightens his hair as the strong wind blows at him.] 3 [Bright scence of the sun shining and the wind still blowing.] 4 [Tonami and Tsubaki looks at each other.] --- Page 78 [Full page shot of Tonami and Tsubaki kissing.] --- Page 79 1 [Tonami and Tsubaki looks at each other, as their lips part.] 2 Tsubaki: ----- Why? Tonami: Eh? 3 [Tonami is stunned.] Tsubaki: [off] Why did you kiss me? 4 [Tonami's pov of Tsubaki.] --- Page 80 1 [Closeup of Tsubaki, with a questioning look] Tsubaki: I want to know. 2 [Tonami and Tsubaki in 'quarelling' mode, ie. shouting at each other] Tonami: ~~~~~~~! You want to know. You'd have done it with anybody! Tsubaki: I care about who it is! A regular guy wouldn't have done it! That's dirty! 3 [Tight shot of the still stunned Tonami.] 4 [Tonami's pov of Tsubaki] Tsubaki: You did it before, too. It's not that I don't like it. Tsubaki: I just thought doing that seemed ordinary! ~~~~~Is it like that for you? --- Page 81 1 [Side view of Tonami's face.] 2 [Tsubaki looks at Tonami questioningly.] Tsubaki: ? 3 Tsubaki: --------- Tonami: Maybe you like me? 4 Tsubaki: Yeah. --- Page 82 1 [Tonami and Tsubaki in 'quarelling' mode. Both of them have sweatdrops.] Tonami: Do you know I mean by like!? You don't kiss friends! Tsubaki: I know that-----! 2 [Closeup of Tsubaki.] Tsubaki: It's fun being with you. I often think about you. Tonami: But why? 3 [Tsubaki smiles softly.] Tsubaki: It's not like I can't fall in love with a guy like you. --- Page 83 [Full page view of Tonami stunned.] --- Page 84 1 [View of the sky and clouds.] narration: I didn't notice. 2 [Tsubaki is surprised, as Tonami puts his hand on her shoulder.] 3 [Tonami surrounds Tsubaki with his arms.] 4 [Tonami hugs Tsubaki.] Tonami: I like you, too, Sakura. --- Page 85 1 [Closeup of Tsubaki, smiling with her eyes closed, in contentment.] 2 [View of trees, and clouds in the sky.] narration: It's clearly there. Inside Sakura. Sakura's shoulders were definitely thinner than I thought the first time I touched them, but it's enough that they can take away my pain when I hold her in my arms. I'm jumping with joy. I've been freed from the past. I can walk once again. --- Page 86 1 [View of a long, empty corridor.] 2 [Closeup of Tonami, smiling.] narration: At any rate, I see the time when I say that I'm that Tonami Takefumi. 3 [Tonami sees Arima before him.] 4 [Tonami's pov of Arima, who doesn't look real happy. There are some dark clouds behind Arima.] 5 [Tonami's profile.] narration: Arima-kun? --- Page 87 1 [A black panel.] narration: What you hold in your heart 2 [Arima walks pass Tonami.] Tonami: Um ... Arima FX: 3 [Tonami talks to Arima's back.] Tonami: I'm sorry for being insensitive Tonami: I definitely won't do it anymore. 4 [Closeup of Tonami.] Tonami: I have someone I like. --- Page 88 1 [Tonami continues to talk to Arima's back.] Tonami: I think of you as a friend. 2 [A white panel.] Tonami: I won't give up until you forgive me. 3 [Closeup of Arima. His scary expression seems to have relaxed slightly.] 4 [View pulls back to show both Tonami and Arima in the corridor. Arima has stop walking.] --- Page 89 1 [View of opened windows in a classroom.] ?: [off] So ho--------t 2 [Yukino is distressed as she writes on some paper with her mechanical pencil. Aya is sweating, her eyes contracted to vertical lines. Beside her, Tsubasa is very lively, while Maho is combing her hair with her fingers, her eyes closed, and she is sweating also.] Yukino: Uu... I don't feel so good. My notes are sticking to my hand because of the sweat. Aya: I'm shivering from thinking too much. I wonder if it's painful for people to be studying for exams. Aya: *Ah. Won't we be overworked like the rest of Japan?* Tsubasa FX: Lively Maho: I.. Today's not good... I'll plan something else. 3 [Closeup of all three girls talking. Yukino has her mechanical pencil touching her chin as she thinks. As always, Maho's eyes are closed.] Yukino: Guys are lucky, ne. They can wear tank tops. Aya: There are even guys who go topless. Maho: I don't like being too lax. 4 [View of thier shoes.] ?: [off] But girls high schools are like that probably. They take wide steps and their skirts flutter..... ?: [off] They don't have to worry about those if there's just people of the same sex. --- Page 90 1 [A creepy, dark background. Aya's face is blue.] Aya: There's something I heard from my older brother...... In boys' high schools, there are guys who walk around the hallways in their briefs and go to class. Aya: *They must be a pretty progressive school* 2 [Yukino, Aya and Maho, hands clapped to their face, and few strands of hair popping out.] Yukino/Aya/Maho: (thought) NO!! 3 door FX: Rika: [off] Sorry for making you wait, everybody. 3 [Profile of Rika, smiling but looks a bit tired.] Rika FX: Rika: I'm done with the costumes. arrow: (point to Rika) lacking sleep * Ohhhhhhh-------- 4 [Yukino is estatic as she sees herself dressed in a lab coat, high boots and gloves. Maho is wearing a suit, gloves and high heels. Tsubasa, on the other hand is still wearing a t-shirt and shorts as she changes.] Yukino: [off] Wow------ This is cool------ Maho: *hot...* Tsubasa: *In the middle of changing.* --- Page 91 1 [Maho is miffed at the comment.] ?: [off] Maho-san's a handsome guy----! Maho: ! 2 [View of Tsubasa, looking like a doll.] ?: [off] Tsubasa-chan's cute-------! 3 Yukino: This is great------! Thanks, Rika-chan. Rika: Yeah, but I'm glad. Aya: You did it, Rika! Rika: I felt I had to do it the closer the actual performance gets. Uu.... I'm so excited------! 4 [View of buildings, clouds high in the sky.] 5 [Evening approaches.] 6 [Sky view of students working on the festival props.] construction FX: Guy: *Carry this.* --- Page 92 1 [Side view of Arima's face.] 2 [Back view of Arima sliding open a door.] door FX: 3 [Arima's profile.] 4 [Arima's pov of Yukino asleep on her arms. Desks are stacked up behind her. The floor is littered with papers, a roll of tape lying around and a box full of waste paper.] 5 [Arima is now standing beside the desk which Yukino is sleeping on.] 6 [Closeup of Yukino asleep.] Yukino FX: --- Page 93 1 [Arima smiles softly.] 2 [A white panel.] narration: Did you tell your other self what you're looking for? 3 [Arima is shouting and Yukino wakes up in a shock.] Souichirou: U... WAAAAAAAH!!! Souichirou FX: Yukino FX: Yukino: WAAAH! 4 [Yukino is wiping her sweat with her arms. Arima, on the other hand, is sweating profusely, probably from shock. ^^] Yukino: Ah. You surprised me.... I dreamt I was being tired out by a bamboo spear... You really get nightmares if you take afternoon naps on a day this hot. Souichirou: Souichirou: I guess that was pretty surprising.. 5 [Yukino stretches her arms on the desk. She is smiling happily, as she looks at Arima.] Yukino: Arima Souichirou: But it's evening already. It's gotten much cooler. 6 [Yukino's profile.] 7 [Arima's profile.] --- Page 94 1 [Yukino is rubbing her eyes.] Souichirou: How long have you been asleep? Everyone in class has gone home for the day already. Yukino: Thanks. 2 [Closeup of Arima, with a gentle smile.] Souichirou: 'Til what time are you staying today, Miyazawa? 3 [Yukino is frowning slightly as she thinks.] Yukino: Hmmmmmmmm. I'll be going to public relations and the student council meeting from here. And then, while nothing's going on, I'm going back to practicing the play. 4 [Polka dotted background. Arima has a single sweatdrop.] Souichirou: Sounds hectic. Yukino: But you seem much busier, Arima. You're in a lot more committees than I am. 5 [Yukino is smiling happily.] Yukino: What about you? Is your kendou club doing a food stand? Yukino: * What are you doing? Udon?* Souichirou: ............. 6 [Arima's eyes are contracted to dots, and he's blushing slightly. Yukino is in horror at his answer.] Souichirou: ..........Home-made cake shop... made by 20 guys.... Souichirou: *There aren't any girls in our club.* Yukino: ! 7 [Arima gets all-worked up as Yukino looks on.] Souichirou: Because the captain mastered to perfection making sponge cake, chiffon, and shoe cream during summer break!! It's not really an environment I can say no to anymore!!! Souichirou: *That guy didn't even study for exams after interhigh.* Yukino: Hmmmmmmm. I want to meet that captain one time. 8 [Flowery background. Yukino looks very happy. Both are visible sweating.] Yukino: It's cool.... I'm definitely dropping in~~~~~~~~........ Souichirou: Yeah, definitely! We do afternoon tea, too. --- Page 95 1 [Closeup of Arima.] Souichirou: What about you, Miyazawa? Is the play going well? 2 [Closeup of Yukino.] Yukino: Yeah. Everyone's really great~~~~~~~~ 3 Yukino: Today, we got to see the costumes Rika-chan made. She's really good at them. Asapin really has practical sense in making things. Souichirou: He-----h 4 [Closeup of Yukino, pondering.] Yukino: I wonder if it's turning into a sociology study. There are different types of talents. Saying "I can study" isn't everything. It's just one out of the many talents. [Note: A better translation would probably be "Saying 'I'm good with academics' isn't everything."] 5 [Closeup of Arima, his head resting on his palm.] Souichirou: Yeah. 6 [View of Yukino, pointing a finger to her head.] Yukino: I'm not disappointed to say that "I can't do anything but study." I like my brains that can think that way about my friends and my own abilities. Yukino: Won't I grow to like myself more and more if I stretch out and find each thing that's good about myself like this? --- Page 96 1 [Arima's pov of Yukino smiling happily.] Yukino: And then, I thought Arima would like me more. 2 [Arima is stunned.] --- Page 97 [A black panel at the top and bottom of the page. In between, is a view of the shiny surface of water.] narration: .....I wonder why. I wonder why I can't be happy when I'm thinking like this. I wonder if my heart within my thoughts are becoming dirtied and ugly. --- Page 98 1 [View pulls back to show Arima and Yukino looking at each other.] 2 [Closeup of Arima.] Souichirou: More than this? Souichirou: I like you more than this, more than I can think, now. 3 [Yukino is smiling happily.] Yukino: But still... Yukino: We're steadily growing into adults from here. 4 [A black panel, with a small globe of white light at the center.] narration: You know the real me. --- Page 99 1 [Arima's hand cover's Miyazawa's.] 2 [They kiss.] --- Page 100 1 [Thier eyes are still closed, as their lips part.] 2 [Flowery background. Yukino is blushing.] Yukino: hehehe Yukino: I said embarassing things. 3 [Arima's profile.] Souichirou: No... it's ok. I'm glad. 4 Yukino: What time are you going home today? Yukino: *I have to go already. Souichirou: I don't know. But wait for me. Yukino: Ok. Let's go home together today. 5 [View of an open window, with the evening sky in view.] 6 [Polka dotted background.] Yukino: This is probably the last day it's going to be this hot, ne. Souichirou: And after a while more, we'll be changing to winter uniforms, ne. * The winter uniforms are too long. --- Page 101 1 [Yukino is chatting happily.] Yukino: Winter uniforms, huh~~~~~~ How nostalgic~~~~~ It reminds me of when I first met you. Yukino: * I like Arima's winter uniform. Souichirou: That so? 2 Yukino: Ah! By the way! 3 [Empty panel.] Yukino: [off] Did you get the print-out on the winter school trip? Souichirou: [off] I saw it. Yukino: [off] They're going to work as hard on this one next, huh----- 4 [Flowery background. Back view of Arima and Yukino talking. Arima has a single sweatdrop.] Souichirou: They're asking for perfect group behaviour, ne. They said to form groups with similar interests within the classes. Souichirou: * 3 to 7 people. Yukino: Yeah! I'm going to be with Aya and the gang------ Souichirou: -------What about me? 5 [Arima is very agitated.] Yukino: Eh..... But it's going to be a girl group. But then... I think Asapin's definitely going to want to be with you. Yukino: * So then you can be with your kendo club friends!!! * 1 Yukino 2 Maho 3 Tsubasa 4 Tsubaki 5 Rika 6 Aya 7 Arima 1 x Asapin 2 Tonami? 3 Souichirou: I'll be with the girls!!! [Note: Huh?] 6 [Back view of Yukino and Arima walking.] Yukino: The long-awaited school trip will give you memories with Asapin. Souichirou: I don't want memories during the season. narration: Your light shines on me --- Page 102 1 [Black background. View of an outstretched palm.] narration: So I won't be caught in the darkness. ACT 35 * 14 DAYS / END ACT 35 * 14 DAYS / owari ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Homepage: http://karekano.hazydaze.net/ Email at: lostin[a]hazydaze.net Date: November 27, 2000 Updated: December 22, 2000